Friday, July 6, 2007

aaboddho

kancher jar chapa moth er mato chokrakare ghurchhi ekta britter bhetore
ondher mato hatre hatre poth khujchhi baire berobar
jedikei hat barai sudhu bheja deowaler jome otha syaola
ekrash hotoshar moto hate ese lage
eto khuji kintu dorjar hodish pai na
dure dekhi ekta khin alor rekha
aleyar mato tene niye jachhey amay
alor utsho onusoron kore dekhi
se amar banchhete chaoya moner tairi arek morichika

EDITED BY ARNAB SEN
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2 comments:

brishtileena said...

the opening imagery is very captive, instantaneously roused the picture of a moth, wriggling and gasping in an air-tight jar....the poet also employs tautology---'chokrakare ghurchhi ekta britter bhetore'---makes its intense, though ghurchhi sounded a bit colloquial....
in the next two lines the helplessness of this moth is substantianted further ---'ondher mato hatre hatre poth khujchhi baire berobar'... is very picturesque and poignant....

'eto khuji kintu dorjar hodish pai na'---the syntax is very prosaic and insipid as compared to the other penetrating expressions.
The concluding four lines are very intense, rich and ornamented.

Wednesday, July 11, 2007 8:59:00 PM
chupkotha said...

comment ta besh bhalo..porer bar lekhar somoy ar ektu kheyal kore likhbo eigondogol gulo mathay rekhe

Wednesday, July 11, 2007 9:20:00 PM

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