Sunday, July 1, 2007

smriti

smrititite jome thake somoyer med
poli pore jay khotote
purano diner chhoto chhoto kotha
ja eksomoyer kosto anader bhagidar
aj se udesyabihin
ek niropekkho kothar dolil
smriti se ek virtual concept
icchey korlei bajano jay
purano sei cd gulo r mato
tai dukkho smriti moner kone jome thake
dhulo pora chhoto belar
pathya boi er mato
sudhu ektai khed majhe majhe mone jage
chaile jodi puro jibontakei smriti banano jeto
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2 comments:

brishtileena said...

The most-striking thing in it is the use of the metaphors:somoyer med is very uncommon... very intriguing indeed to relate an abstract and inanimate concept to a biological process; 'poli pora' is worth-mentioning.
As a reader, I felt that there's a continuous interplay of past-present,for instance, the use of imageries of poli-pora and cd establishes this fact. Also the imagery of an old book evokes the pangs of nostaligia. Here the word yellow could have made it more touching.'kosto-anonder' is sounding cliched, could be replaced by some better word. Needs more etching!

Sunday, July 01, 2007 8:42:00 AM
Arnab said...

samayer med jotoi smiriti dheke dik, kono ek naam na jana mon kharper bikele, kinba dur theke bhese ase dhaker shobde ---srmiti gulo jeno moreo morte chai na....

asole ei jibon tai kicchu smritir samasti...kichhu sukhokar, onek kicchu bedonadayok, ogulo jiboner dolil, ek ek murhurte amra jibon ke kemon kore bnechhilam tar nirab sakhhi.... smiriti hariye gele je jibon tai hariye jabe...sei naam porichoyhin jibon ke boye berate berate amra ochire hanpiye porbo....tai smriti thak...hok na samayer dhusor kham e bandi...tabu se thak...

Sunday, July 01, 2007 5:22:00 PM

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