sei bidaybelay
chhobi hoyechhilo dhusar/
bishonnotamakha
ek tukro abeg
joriye dhore sahosa
bhijiye tullo somogro akhipallab
miliye jai digonter kone tomar abayab/
ek jora chonchol akhitaara
dur, bahudur theke
chutey chay tomar kopal, gaal, thot,
sikto bedonay pichhal hoy
jabar path---
aakantho kanna haariye jay
ei janokolaholer majhdoriyay/
firey jetey chai sei nibirnirey
kintu ferar path shithil
hoy ghano ondhokarmakha
abishwasher berajaley/
klanti nemey ashey chokhe---
kothao ki ek tukro ashroy
pabo, pabo ei bhoradubi bidaysandhay?
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4 comments:
kabitar bhasa besh sundar, sabolil ... ek dhurosotar chhap sara kabitar modhye ...ja kabitar mul bhabtake dhore rakhe ....sesher line kotike fute uthechhe kobir byakul arti....ja khub e marmosporshi...tabu kicchu jaygay kicchu prosno thekei jai...prosno ta muloto 2nd aar 3 rd para r jogajog ghire....prothom 2 to para-te je biday belar bishhonno chhobi annka hoyechhe, tar sathe 3rd para te bornito kabir asa ba akkhep er jogajog ta osposto...
arnab tomar comment ta khub bhalo likhechho, ashole ekta obscurity rakhtey amar besh bhalo lagey...tobe akkhep ta ektu illogical shonachche pore amaro mone holo ei muhurtey, achcha obscure er bangla ta ki boltey paro? ei muhurte amar thik mone porchhe na!
prothomoto likhi obscure mane durbodhya..
ebar asha jak kobita prosonge...kobitar rhythm ta sundar...ekti meyer biraho,dayiter sathe milaner akul protyasha,asha akankha... meyeti chhere esechhey ssei poth.....kntu fire jete chay abar tar premaspoder kachhey..porte porte kokhon jeno kobitar modhye nijeke khuje pai
chupkatha tomar chokhe o je sei bidaykhoner chobi futey utheche ta tomar comment pore besh bujhlam....ei dhoroner anubhuti sob manusher jibone kono na kono somoy uki diye jay, sobai hoyto eta niye lekha-r katha bhavbe na, ei ja...
Aristotlean theory te ei dhoroner concept dewa achhe/ Abhinavagupta tai bolechhen, a true critic identify hiimself/herself with the poet's feeling and reflects it like a clear mirror.
hoyto kichu bhishnno abeg dilam tomay, kintu setar moddhey to bhalo laga o achhe, nijer katha, nijer anubhuti...ja ekanto nijoshyo tai na?
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