swapno ke ki chhoya jay
sada kalo lal nil ekrash swapno
amar ghumer modhye ese khela ,kore
chuye chuye ure jay amar chardhare
hat barai,dhorte chai tader
kachhey ashe,jeno dhora debe
abar anguler fank diye ure chole jay
amay byango kore....
ekmutho ekrash swapno
amay ghire ure ure beray
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khub touching lekha....amader jiboner charpase emon koto swapno ghure beray...jara swapnoi theke jai....odhora, morichikar moto....swapner picchone chhute chhute amra klanto hoye jai...swapno gulo abar amader hatchhani diye dake ...lobh dekhai...amra abar dhora di...chhutte thaki...tabu swapno gulo ke chhute pari na
swapno swapnoi thake chirokal arnab..dhore felle sei swapner rong hariye jay...bibarno marmere ek bastob......tar theke swapno gulo ke moner opan kuthurite rakhai bodhhoy bhalo..majhe majhe nijer sathe nije eka hole nerechere dekha......rupkothar pranbhomrar mato
The poem abounds in sibilants and fricatives like s and f sounds; truthfully conveys the free-flow of the dreams that hover around... this has an overpowering soft appeal....the poet's use of 'byango' is sounding sharp.
kobita ti jeno moner katha bolchhe...bhalo laglo er rhythm ta... er thekeo bhalo laglo arnab ar chupkathar kathopokathan.
byango ta sharp laglo bolchho kintu kichhu swapno sotti e byango kore...
mone ekanto ichhey paoyar
r tara hatr nagale thekeo chirokal dhorachhoyar baire theke jay....
upohas kore chole protiniyato
byango ta sharp legechhe thiki, ei dhoroner tibrota bojhanor janye etar proyojon chilo, i appreciated that, tobe upohas ta hole kharap shonato na, kintu bhango sabdoti-r aghatti kobita-ke aro marmosparshi korechhe.
thanks di
lekha ti pore mone holo eta to amari kotha......sobar i kichhu na kichhu swapno thake..... swapno chhara manush bachte pare na....moner kone lukiye rakhe oti jatno kore.....kakhoo kakhono swapno gulo baire beriye ase chokher samne....hasi mukhe dake nijer kachhe asar jonno....bar bar dake.... dekhe mone hoi ei to kachhei royechhe, hat baralei sparsho korte parbo......jodio mon shai dai na sahoje.....kintu atobar kore jakhon dake----manush to----hat bariyei fale ak bar er jonno....hoito moner bhule....hoito ba abocheton mon er akanto preronai....thik takhoni tragedy.....hasi rupantorito hoi upohas e....ak jhotkai onek onek dure sore jai swapno gulo....firey jai sei moner kone....
uff eto pessimistic keno re tui???????????sobosomoy glass take addhek khali dekhis na..nijei kosto pabi......majha majhe glass er je baki addhek bhorti sekothatao ektu mone koris
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